OC: Kristal's Sequence 1/7

The dialogue in this is really disorienting, both in it's content and how it's presented. I've reread it a few times now, and it's still not entirely clear to me what is happening or why, or who she's talking to. The art is phenomenal and beyond criticism for someone of my skill, but as a visual storytelling device, this piece lacks.

Does the Krystal-O-Vision give us a view of the person she's speaking to? Who is providing the meals at this fast food place? Is it the gym, or the person Krystal is speaking to? Or is it Krystal herself? The flow of the word balloons is cluttered and a little counterintuitive.

I don't mean to be harsh. I'm still excited for the sequence. It's just always sad to see great artwork held back by problems like these.